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miércoles, 21 de enero de 2015

My grandmother

My grandmother is one of the best person that I know. When I was a little girl, I stayed so many time with her because my parents was working. She isn't very big person, she is small but very pretty. She's name is Soledad and she has short hair. My granmother is always happy, honest and very intelligent. I love very much when she told me histories about when she was young. Mu grandmather nowadays live with my grandfather in a little hause where are much plants. She love plants and flowers. The favourite series or her is "Saber y Ganar" and "Pasapalabra". In conclision, my grandmother really is a good person. 
Football

Football is a sport that I hate much for any raison like the money that cost this sport or the violence by fans.

On the one hand, football moves a lot of money every year. A fotball team costs million of euros, or dollars, or pounds, and the player cost much money. In another part of th world, some kids who haven't got money die all days because of hunger. The monety that the football teams pay for the famous players could be to the kids that, in this society or in another, don't have anything to eat nowadays.

On the other hand, this sport is very famous in television. In the news, particulary in sport section, everytime is football, Cristiano Ronaldo,  Bale, and more famous players. What happens with the other sport as bastketball or horse riding? Two weeks ago, when I eas watching the televisión, on the news it is said of the supercup of bastketball, but only a few minutes.

Nevertheless, the violence in football's fans could be dangerous like one day,  when one person died.

In conlusion, football couldn't be the most important and expensive sport all over the world. Society has most important problems the goal for a team.
Outline

  • Football
  1. Fotball is a sport that I hate...
  2. It's an expensive sport  because...
  3. On the television, only fotball, violence...
  4. Sumarize, football becomes a world sport...


       Practice Essay

That way, they get money to pay anything during their life, like the rent or their clothes. Moreover, with the job, the student is introduced in the world of work. They learn be polite with the clients. But the most important thing is the money.

To add information, this is my case. My parents havent't got any money to pay my student life. For this reason, the past summer I found a job. I have been working and I got some money. Nowadays, my parents don't pay my rent and anything to me.

To sumarize, I want to say that not having money is a problem if you are studying and you have to pay something, but you can find a job. It will be better for you in some aspects of your life.



Some common mistakes

Other+plural= other peoples

Another+singular= another person

Others= pronoun

Since= present perfect

Ago= past tense

Arrive at= a station, a village...

Arrive in= a country

To know / to get to know / meet
                        |                  |
               the process      the first

In the end= we decided to go for a walk and relax

At the end= of the day


University

In my first day at the university I was very nervous because I didn't know the university life. In the class there were so much people that I didn't know, also teachers.
Going to the university suposse independence because I live in a flat with my friends, I'm not whith my family.
One thing that I love of the university are the partie and my new friends.
In concusion, learning my own way.


No money - find a job

Nowadays, the cost to study at the university and live in the big city is elevated. For this reason, students shuold find a job to help this parents.

First of all, studying at the university has an elevated cost. Althougth living in another hause without your family around the university is too another cost. For example, you have to pay your rent, the gas, water and, of course, your food Also, you have go to parties and you must pau for this. For your parents, all this payment supposes a big budget. If your parents are rich, you haven't got any probem, but this is not my case.

In addition to, students should find a job in theirs fretimes, for example, in holidays or when they don't have class.